Tuesday 25 October 2016

Title: Flowers for Algernon Author Daniel Keyes

Charlie Gordon is about to embark upon an unprecedented journey.  Born with an unusually low IQ he has been chosen as the perfect subject for an experimental surgery that researchers hope will increase his intelligence - a procedure that has already been highly successful when tested on a lab mouse named Algernon.  
As the treatment takes effect, Charlie's intelligence expands until it surpasses that of the doctors who engineered his metamorphosis.  The experiment appears to be a scientific breakthrough of paramount importance, until Algernon suddenly deteriorates.  Will the same happen to Charlie?

'"Dr. Strauss says I shoud rite down what I think and remembir and evrey thing that happens to me from now on."'

We follow Charlie through his transformation through a series of journal entries.  The first passages are written using very simple language and is fraught with spelling and grammatical errors signifying Charlie's limited mind; a window into his handicap.  This is paramount to the story as it's the very reason he was chosen for the experiment in the first place.  After many tests they tell him about a surgery meant to increase his intelligence.  Charlie likes that idea because '[he] wantid to be smart.'  He's disappointed after the surgery because he assumed he would immediately wake up and be smarter.  But he has to work for it.  His only friend and teacher at the home for mentally challenged adults, Miss Kinnian, Alice, tells him 'it woud stick with [him] and not be like befor when it dint stick so good.'

The testing continues and Charlie get increasingly frustrated as Algernon, the mouse whose own achievements spurred Charlie's surgery, keeps winning all the tests and games they play.

'I hate that mouse.  He always beets me.'

However, this changes less than a month later.  Charlie's progress reports are seen to improve in errors and in thought complexity.  Winning against Algernon proves to Charlie that he is, indeed, getting smarter.  That the surgery was a success.  He is excited and rushes to tell Alice, whom he's been spending more and more time with.  She helps him learn and encourages him to work hard.

Not two months after the operation he begins to notice that Alice is a woman, a female.  He's never looked at her that way, never looked at any woman that way.  He wants to go on a date with her but she is reluctant.  She never suspected her tutelage would turn into romance.  She agrees to go on a date, but Charlie is unfamiliar with his new feelings for her as a woman.  He tries to become more intimate with her and she rejects him; his first.  It hurts him and confuses him, so he insists.  His need for her, his need for a normal human relationship, increases with his IQ.

'[She's] the first woman [he's] every been really aware of in [that] way...'

'"See other women," she advises.  "Give yourself more time."'

As the weeks wear on he finds himself out growing the people he'd once thought of as friends which includes his budding romance with Alice.  In fact, his intelligence improves so radically he even begins to surpass his doctors.

'Strauss again brought up [Charlie's] need to speak and write simply and directly so that people will understand [him]... that language is sometimes a barrier instead of a pathway.  Ironic to find [himself] on the other side of the intellectual fence.'

The operation continues to improve his IQ which causes him to think about the world differently.  His mind clears and he can look back to sort through hazy, childhood memories.  The doctor's are so impressed with his progress they announce they're taking him and Algernon to an international convention.  Charlie is excited to meet and mingle with the smartest minds in the world.  His frustration for his own doctor's limits is eager to be assuaged among these supposed giants of men.  Everyday people and mundane conversation no longer hold any interest for him.  He becomes impatient when others can't follow his ideas.  He feels resentment towards the doctors, once thinking them so smart, now knowing more than them, more than anyone could possibly learn in a lifetime.  In less than half a year Charlie has gone on to do his own research regarding the experiment in the many different languages he's been able to learn and understand fluently.  He confronts his doctors' with information regarding his mental retardation and newly acquired intelligence which only reveals a deep lacking in their understanding.

'To hear [them] admit that [they] were ignorant of whole areas in their own fields was terrifying,' Charlie writes.

He also has to face the fact that he is their experiment, their most prized research and he doesn't like them staking their reputations and glory on him.

During the lecture about the his success as said experiment he discovers the doctors video recorded his early testing. 

'[he] had never known that [his] early performances and tests... were filmed.  There [he] was... confused and open-mouthed as [he] tried to run the maze... Each time [he failed, his] expression changed to an absurd wide-eyed stare, then that foolish smile again.'

Each time it happened the audience roared with laughter.  Race after race it was repeated and each time they found it funnier and funnier than before.  Charlie sits there, on the stage, watching these brilliant minds from around the globe laughing so freely at his expense and gets the urge to suddenly release the precious Algernon from his cage.  Without realizing it, he flips the lock and lets his comrade loose.  Pandemonium erupts in the lecture hall as everyone scrambles to catch the intelligent rodent.  Charlie uses it to make his own escape, Algernon tucked safely in his pocket. 

Away from the laboratory Charlie uses the chance to try to contact his family.  He can recognize them but has to remind himself that they wouldn't possibly recognize him after 15 years. 

He begins to see the paradox within him; the smarts, but really no life experience, no practice making and keeping relationships.  He reaches out anyway.  Bittersweet memories of home are closely examined without the haze of his retardation influencing every recalled image.  He cannot stay away.  He fears he may never get another chance.  Navigating these unfamiliar areas of human interaction is difficult as Charlie tries to reclaim something he hadn't known he'd lacked; love.

Keenly aware of this imbalance inside him he can't help but continue to challenge the doctors.  He knows something they don't but they don't like to listen, and he can't express himself properly without anger and frustration.  Charlie is both too smart for his own good, but utterly lacking at the same time.  He admits they've taken care of him.  He has his own place, a small salary, but he is all too aware of what else they've neglected.

'"Everything but treat me as a human being.  You've boasted... that I was nothing before the experiment... Because if I was nothing, then you were responsible for creating me, and that makes you my lord and master.  You resent the fact that I don't show my gratitude every hour of the day... I am grateful.  But what you did for me - wonderful as it is - doesn't give you the right to treat me like an experimental animal.  I'm an individual now, and so was Charlie before he ever walked into that lab... suddenly we discover that I was always a person... and that challenges your belief that someone with an IQ of less than 100 doesn't deserve consideration."'

After that it isn't long before Charlie is done with the experiment.  He sees what's happening to Algernon and doesn't want to end up the same way. 

'"No more tests.  I don't want to take any more tests... Not just for today.  I'm not coming back here any more... I've done enough.  I want to be left alone now."'

They try to persuade him to stay, to see it through.  After all, their PhD's are riding on it.  But through it all Charlie's learned one very important thing; the preciousness of time and the comfort of others.

This book takes the reader through the hard-to-understand levels of academia with ease and peels back these intellectual layers to expose the raw, human truth behind scientific breakthroughs, proving we all have the need for human connection.

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