Wednesday, 27 January 2016

Title: The Unfinished Child Author: Theresa Shea

When Marie MacPherson, a mother of two, finds herself unexpectedly pregnant at thirty-nine, she feels guilty. Her best friend, Elizabeth, has never been able to conceive, despite years of fertility treatments. Marie's dilemma is further complicated when she becomes convinced something is wrong with her baby. She then enters the world of genetic testing and is entirely unprepared for the decision that lies ahead.

Friends for over 30 years, Elizabeth and Marie have faced their share of joys and sorrows and have always managed to remain close, in spite of their differences.  They tell each other everything, sharing their lives with each other, relying on their closeness to help them through tough times.  That is, until Marie gets unexpectedly pregnant with her third child at 39 years old.  her other two daughters, aged 10 & 12 adore their 'aunt' Elizabeth, almost more than they adore their own mother.  In spite of the two women's desire to raise their children together, Elizabeth has never been able to conceive a child even after trying for years, naturally at first, then through several rounds of invitro.  Marie knows her friend longs for a baby of her own and is afraid to reveal her surprise pregnancy.  She tries to tell herself that she's afraid the baby will have something wrong with it and doesn't want to reveal the secret too early.  Really she's worried how Elizabeth will react.  She knows the pain it will inevitably cause.  However, not being able to talk about it with her best friend weighs on her heart.  She tries more than once to start the conversation that would lead to her confession, but every time decides it not the right time.  She ends up waiting too long and one afternoon Elizabeth guesses the truth.  Marie, relieved she didn't have to say the words, nevertheless apologizes because she feels guilty to be having yet another baby while her friend has never had one.

"I think I'm a little old for an unplanned pregnancy, don't you?" she says after her initial apology.

Marie knows the news has hurt her friend, even though Elizabeth tries to hide it.  She admits to herself that their friendship has changed with the birth of her other two children.  She hopes it can withstand the third one.

Trying to be happy for her best friend Elizabeth can't help the tears from falling as she leaves the happy family.  She's bitter, angry, and overcome by all her years of trying, of hormones and needles and doctors and implanted embryo's that continually fail to make her body their home.  She knows it's not right to blame her husband, but feels a deep need to change, escape.

"All [she] ever wanted was to be a mother, and... when [they] finally decided to stop the treatments [she] had to let go of that dream... [She's] not living the life [she] thought [she'd]be at this stage in [her]life..."  Elizabeth makes a plan to implement the changes she thinks are necessary.  She takes time away from her husband, from Marie, from Marie's daughters and growing fetus.

Marie, after a dream, becomes convinced that something is wrong with her baby.  She knows that her advanced age means certain risks, including the baby's risk of having Down Syndrome.  She goes to the doctor where she is informed they can't test for it for another couple months.  She discusses the options with her husband as they decide what to do if the baby tests positive.

"We can't... make any decisions until we know... if we end the pregnancy now would we be deciding not to have another child because we really didn't want one, or because we were afraid it wasn't well?"

"I don't see what difference that would make," her husband, Barry, replies.

Every day closer to that test brings more and more tension to the couple.  Marie feels it's all up to her to decide the fate of their child.  She doesn't dare confide in Elizabeth, even though she desperately needs to.  She knows that no matter what pain she is going through Elizabeth has had her share of it with every failed attempt.  Finally Elizabeth calls her and invites Marie and the girls over for lunch.  Marie feels irrationally jealous, convinced that her girls like their beautiful, care-free, unharried aunt better.  Barry suggests the girls stay home, knowing that his wife misses her friend dearly.  Marie agrees and goes for lunch at her best friend's house alone.

Two weeks before the test Marie's daughters notice their mothers pregnancy.  Marie cringes at the questions they spew at her.  She was hoping to have made a decision about the baby before they found out.  She knows they'd love a new baby in the house, and she knows they'll be sad if the child is unwell.  She doesn't want to disappoint them, and cannot hide her growing frame from them any longer.  She confirms the pregnancy and hopes they won't become too heart broken if the baby doesn't come home.

The day of her test arrives followed shortly by the test results.  The announcement is devastating.

"Are you sure there hasn't been some mistake," Barry asks.  "How accurate is this test anyway?"

"About 98%," the doctor replies.

Barry asks about the procedure, if Marie has to stay overnight.  Marie is told she that if they chose to terminate the pregnancy she'll be induced and will have to go through labour to deliver the unfortunate child.  'There would be no reward for the pain.  Nothing to look forward to after her body emptied itself of its burden.'

She calls Elizabeth and they agree to meet for coffee.  Marie finds herself confessing everything.  Elizabeth suggests she sleep on it, take her time considering her options.  Marie reveals that she doesn't have the time she needs.  She's too far along.  It'll soon be too late to terminate.

Elizbeth feels there is an easy solution to the problem.

'Words rose unbidden to Elizabeth's mouth.  Her lips parted, "I'll take the child...I know it sounds crazy... but if you don't want the baby and you don't want to abort it either, give her to me.  Let me raise her for you."

Marie is stunned and flee's the coffee shop, flees the suggestion, flees her friend.

'This decision was likely going to be the biggest turning point in her life.  She would need to live with herself afterwards, no matter what action she decided to take.'

Both husbands are shocked at what Elizabeth has proposed.  They both agree it's an outrageous request.  Both of them insist it can't or won't happen that way.

Marie asks Barry, "... Are we going for what's easy, or what's right?"

Everything comes down to Marie.  Her options are laid out before her, the question becomes which path is best.  She considers the choices, wonders how she'll feel if she kills the child, wonders how she'll feel if she gives it away.  There is only one clear answer, she knows the child isn't coming home with her.  Will her decision affect her marriage?  Her friendship with Elizabeth?  Marie feels utterly alone as she finally makes her choice.

The Unfinished Child is an eye-opening account of what it means to be a child with Down syndrome.  It's a story of tough decisions, of life lessons and relationships.  It's a tale that shows how each person can be admired and envied for different things, and that the life we think we want doesn't always turn out how we expect it to.  The novel has a depth that goes beyond the two families, that shines a light on human connections and the power of family.  It's a story of friendship surviving the worst.  The Unfinished Child will move into your heart and have you questioning the very things you thought you knew and often take for granted.

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